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Terry Belter

The second and third loglines can very easily be made better by combining them into a single sentence. Something like:

A lonely Boy trapped in an abandoned orphanage tries to make friends with a butterfly and find a way to make it human.

4 prisoners of the victorian kingdom of Synkrousi are trapped in a tower and have to race to the top of the shifting tower in order to gain their freedom.