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Terry Belter

A good start, but it could actually use some more descriptors to make it more interesting. What kind of boys? What is the apartment haunted by if we’re suppose to know? Otherwise just add a word like mysterious, ominous, or foreboding. To make sure you don’t use too many words you can remove Nevada as the average person, even outside of this town, would assume you’re referring to las vegas nevada and not somewhere else.