Blog

Welcome Forums Fall 2019 Character Ideation Week 1 Loglines Reply To: Week 1 Loglines

#532
Sheff
Keymaster

In the ancient Kingdom of Extronia, an uptight mute general tries to get revenge on the soldiers who betrayed him.

Boy who is all alone is trapped in an abandoned orphanage. He tries to make friends with a butterfly and tries to find a way to make it human.

4 prisoners of the victorian kingdom of Synkrousi are trapped in a tower. They have to race to the top of the shifting tower in order to gain freedom.

Jonathan,

I like the boy trying to befriend a (magic?)butterfly. I think this is stronger than the mute general. Take your pick which one you want to do, but if it was me, I’d do the butterfly. You could call it

    The Butterfly Prince.

Thanks,
Sheff